Me
and my friends nonchalantly walk down a cement walkway, leading to a light sky
blue pool, that consists of many people throughout a range of ages. My 3
friends and I grab towels, and dive into the sky blue pool. And the fwooshh
noise fills my ears, as well as water the bubbles rush to the top of the water,
and I do too, I spring off of the floor of the pool up to the sun filled sky. A
ball smashes my face, coming from one of the better pitchers on our team so it
hurt a little more than normal, after I sunk down and pushed over my friend. He
shoved me back I float away in the darkness of the bottom of the pool, I strive
back up to the top and latch onto a small floating ball at the peak of the
water. My friends keep diving and jumping into the pool making waves, the waves
rise up when I start to breath sinking my mouth in water instead of air.
Nice job describing the moment, it's as if I was there
ReplyDeleteGreat descriptions, Jason. I love how you describe jumping in with a " fwooshh noise," totally perfect way to describe it.
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