Tubing is
like life, it has its ups and its downs its turns and after it all you get up
and walk back to the top. It’s a short thrill excites you for the moment, its
like life, short, you have to make that thrill. As soon as your born you grow
to become more experienced, making jumps, and learning tricks. Meeting
friends, becoming smarter, more aware,
sharp. Then you hear, Jason we have to go, your last ride you want to make it
exciting. You rush down doing all of the tricks you have learned. You slowly
walk to the car to get a ride home, the ride is slow, boring, but cool cars
drove by, giving you a small energy boost. The ride home is the slow ride is
the time when you have to control yourself, becoming an adult, the same old,
same old. You see the cool cars, this is making new friends, the short
excitement in your life.
Oh, Jason! I'm very proud of you :) You tried and I think it turned out excellently! Your first two sentence are particularly striking to me (not only because you actually started with "Life is like tubing because...", but also because it really make a lot of sense. You do have to "make that thrill" in life as in tubing. Well done!
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